Training some Students... DEVEREAUX STYLE! [FEEDBACK]

I thought it was good. The piece was constructed well enough. I'd have probably plumped for more brevity in the descriptive pieces, as it was very chunky in parts; lots of text and long sentences about wrestling moves, etc. That was difficult to digest. However, it's great to see that you've actively chosen to do some CD and it gave us a glimpse of Dick outside of an event or on social media. That's helpful to me as the guy who writes your show segments so thank you for that.

I look forward to seeing more and, as I say, cutting down the heavy descriptives in places will serve you well indeed.

I thought it was a good piece. I too felt it was a little heavy on the descriptive at times but I understand why and like you've said, won't be something you'll do in every piece. It's nice to see Dick in that light so I hope to see more of it. I think you play the character very well and it's great to have you here

Hi.

I really liked it. Learned Dick graduated from the school. Dick's very aggressive out of the ring. Poor students. But I thought it was an unusual thing. I don't know the character as well as other people do, so I wouldn't have seen him taking the time out to 'teach' students. I found that like very fun to see, even if he does back suplex people or chop people. I did expect him to do a shot to the poor boys special area though, not him but one of them.

What I did learn is to cross Dick off as a trainer lol. Very nice. Hope to see more little facts of Dick dropping too, as I'm not the most informed, so gimme gimme lol.

Lol, they have to learn some durability sometime haha, he teaches them to take a horrible chop or how to survive being dropped on their back.