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Post by Jason Kaine on Sept 23, 2016 0:18:41 GMT
I feel really proud of this one and could really use some feedback on it!
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Post by Dick Devereaux on Sept 23, 2016 11:21:55 GMT
Already gave you my feedback personally, but our in the open I'll say it really connected the new pic base with the character. I could really envision him doing eveything in it.
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Post by Jason Kaine on Sept 23, 2016 11:55:33 GMT
Thanks brotha!
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Post by Quintin Blood on Sept 24, 2016 23:16:37 GMT
The only part that I think would have made it better and this is just feedback based on the grammar side of the judging. There were spots where you had the same word twice, and the like where if you read over it again you'll see what I am talking about. Minor stuff. Other than that, very solid RP. At this point the only thing I can hope for in winning our match would be based on this part of judging alone where the points were just enough. So very solid.
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Post by Jason Kaine on Sept 24, 2016 23:55:09 GMT
Thanks man!
And yeah i have a bad habbit of not rereading before posting. Usually because im just ready to be done at that point lol
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