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Post by Tyler Keenan on Sept 17, 2016 23:44:55 GMT
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Post by Ernie Parker on Sept 19, 2016 20:07:16 GMT
I liked the recap feel of the first piece and felt that you did a good job in catching the audience up, albeit briefly, on what Keenan's been up to since we last saw him. For those who haven't heard of him before, or who aren't familiar with him, I get the feeling they got the gist of him in that summary.
The second piece was great, in my personal view. I like to be able to picture the scene in my head as I read and I saw this clearly, thanks to how descriptive it all was. I saw it like a scene in a movie, with Tyler just sitting there having a staring contest with his vice, while an inner monologue acts as a voice over narrative. It was done really well.
Having been the fedhead in IWA when you and Mandy created that intense relationship between him and Evie Taylor, I'm very excited to have both characters on Livewire. I'm certain there'll be a few flashback RPs to look forward to that better explains how they got from where they were to what they became, and finally where they are now. I'm looking forward to it.
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Post by Tyler Keenan on Sept 19, 2016 20:09:36 GMT
I liked the recap feel of the first piece and felt that you did a good job in catching the audience up, albeit briefly, on what Keenan's been up to since we last saw him. For those who haven't heard of him before, or who aren't familiar with him, I get the feeling they got the gist of him in that summary. The second piece was great, in my personal view. I like to be able to picture the scene in my head as I read and I saw this clearly, thanks to how descriptive it all was. I saw it like a scene in a movie, with Tyler just sitting there having a staring contest with his vice, while an inner monologue acts as a voice over narrative. It was done really well. Having been the fedhead in IWA when you and Mandy created that intense relationship between him and Evie Taylor, I'm very excited to have both characters on Livewire. I'm certain there'll be a few flashback RPs to look forward to that better explains how they got from where they were to what they became, and finally where they are now. I'm looking forward to it.
Got a lot more coming from here, don't you worry. I'm glad you thought the second piece was good, especially since I didn't know how it would be received. Sometimes you've just gotta go with your gut and this time it paid off. |
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