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Dick Devereaux
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001 | Grave Digger (FEEDBACK) Sept 9, 2016 2:20:22 GMT

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Post by Dick Devereaux on Sept 9, 2016 2:20:22 GMT

eowrestling.boards.net/thread/165/001-grave-digger

I don't know how I feel about this honestly, but I did it in a way I used to do. Haven't done an RP this way in a few months now so I'd love to hear some feedback on it.

Thanks in advance!

Trixie
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001 | Grave Digger (FEEDBACK) Sept 9, 2016 10:17:49 GMT Dick Devereaux likes this

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Post by Trixie on Sept 9, 2016 10:17:49 GMT

You did manage to tackle everyone on the card, something I really tried to do but it was like 1400 words. I did enjoy them, chuckled at the backhanded compliment to an insult straight away. Dick is so mean. Tough exterior but holding hope he has a sweet caramel center (Sorry Candice, stealing your bit). I think it was very good. You touched on some good points. I do recognize the style from Honor. I did like the squashing the fly metaphor you used. Graveyard was an interesting scene and subtle way of putting Dick over the roster.

I would feel pretty good about it Dick

Mr. Mason: lol Oct 7, 2016 16:32:40 GMT

Mr. Mason: 2 more zack Oct 7, 2016 16:35:17 GMT

EOW Official: Okay that's done now. You guys can carry on using them as normal Oct 7, 2016 16:36:50 GMT

Zack Fantana: Yesss Oct 7, 2016 16:37:12 GMT

Trixie: There's Fantana lol Oct 7, 2016 16:39:05 GMT

Mr. Mason: oh boy Oct 7, 2016 16:47:05 GMT

Mr. Mason: bzzzzzz lol Oct 7, 2016 17:01:47 GMT

Mr. Mason: do we have to answer the thread in the EOW Store to purchase or can we send a PM for a purchase? Oct 7, 2016 17:05:28 GMT

Ernie Parker: Respond in the thread and one of us will deal with it asap Oct 7, 2016 17:09:35 GMT

Mr. Mason: Hey Trixie turn the remote up to the highest setting right? lol Oct 7, 2016 17:59:40 GMT

Aidan Carlisle: Segment sent in. x.x Oct 8, 2016 4:32:50 GMT

Aidan Carlisle: I really do like the purple though for the new stuff. Oct 8, 2016 5:17:27 GMT

Deleted: Dang it. I had a third one ready for Evie but had a family emergency. My daughter broke out in terrible hives. Ended up in emergency. I made post in in the CD board anyway. Good luck Trixie! Oct 8, 2016 15:46:50 GMT

Deleted: May* not made Oct 8, 2016 15:47:08 GMT

Mr. Mason: That sounds like a shitty day for the little one Oct 8, 2016 15:54:04 GMT

Trixie: Don't sweat it Mandy, you did 2 amazing ones. Hope she's ok, did she get any lotion for it? Good luck to you too, I'll read that 3rd one. Oct 8, 2016 16:00:20 GMT

Mr. Mason: oh crap! Forgot to write a show segment for Livewire Oct 8, 2016 18:25:01 GMT

Deleted: She got a shot of steroids. Turns out its a yogurt allergy. With a picky eater, it sucks taking away a food she'll actually eat. Oct 8, 2016 22:24:11 GMT

Mr. Mason: oh that definitely sucks. allergy to a food you like? Then trying to get a picky eater to not eat something she likes and get her to eat other stuff at the same time. Not fun Oct 8, 2016 23:23:04 GMT

Mr. Mason: PM Candy Oct 9, 2016 20:00:05 GMT