Post by Ernie Parker on Sept 8, 2016 16:01:51 GMT
Hey Aidan Carlisle,
As you know, I've been following this little series since the beginning and 'Inconclusion' was a great way to draw a line on this particular act. The only flaw I can see is the made up word as the title
in conclusion is either two words, or it's inconclusive. I'm knit-picking but I always will with you because that's how you play. Of course, you might have intentionally titled it that, in which case apologies for missing the point.
Superb flow, great use of descriptive language to convey the imagery. I'm fascinated by the relationship between Blake and Aidan, now more than ever, given this seemingly unexpected switch from violent obsession to lustful obsession. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Great read.
As you know, I've been following this little series since the beginning and 'Inconclusion' was a great way to draw a line on this particular act. The only flaw I can see is the made up word as the title
in conclusion is either two words, or it's inconclusive. I'm knit-picking but I always will with you because that's how you play. Of course, you might have intentionally titled it that, in which case apologies for missing the point.Superb flow, great use of descriptive language to convey the imagery. I'm fascinated by the relationship between Blake and Aidan, now more than ever, given this seemingly unexpected switch from violent obsession to lustful obsession. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Great read.
