Post by Ernie Parker on Sept 5, 2016 19:01:12 GMT
Hey @marvelous,
In two words? Loved it.
The first person had some real liquid smooth fluidity to it, while the dialogue between he and Liberty/Samantha was on point. You had a back and forth there that wouldn't have sounded out of place on a television set. I write in script format where the focus is on dialogue and strive to master the art of natural speech, so I can really appreciate it when a writer comes in and gives that to me, as a reader.
Brilliant.
In two words? Loved it.
The first person had some real liquid smooth fluidity to it, while the dialogue between he and Liberty/Samantha was on point. You had a back and forth there that wouldn't have sounded out of place on a television set. I write in script format where the focus is on dialogue and strive to master the art of natural speech, so I can really appreciate it when a writer comes in and gives that to me, as a reader.
Brilliant.
