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Post by Jeremiah Greyson on Sept 4, 2016 20:35:38 GMT
I'll be honest with you all. I've never been all that good at playing a character I intend to be a "face" character. Those who know me know that the characters I'm the most comfortable with and most successful are neutral with a heel touch to them, if not full blown heels. That being said, I'm giving a "face" character a go once again here with Jeremiah. If you all could provide me with feedback on what you think of him so far from the first RP I wrote for livewire I would appreciate that so much.
I need to do some CD work with him to flesh him out, sure. But from a "judging a book by its cover" standpoint you guys would really be helping me out a lot.
- Andrew
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Post by Jack Owyns on Sept 4, 2016 21:04:06 GMT
I agree, face characters always seem hard to portray. I’ve always had issues, and most people I know have issues; with writing a face character. I read your piece twice, and from how I read it, you know he isn’t heel, you just don’t get those heel vibes but I also don’t get that feel he is face. Nothing just jumps out at me, you know. I think face is a really hard character to do right. I just got the neutral vibe from him. Though he’s still a new character, and I’m really not use to him yet.
I do look forward to see how you do with this character, and develop him more through RP’s and CD’s.
Cheers man,
Trevor
-I suck at feedback, but I try.
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Post by Trixie on Sept 4, 2016 21:22:32 GMT
I'm like no good at feedback at all, so feel free to ignore me, sweetie.
He certainly isn't a heel from my read. I did like your general theme at the end of looking to the skies, hence the title, right? lol. I did find it hard to kind of place him as a face guy, I do think that applies when you talk about his dedication from a young age, but I think that also applies to heels too; so neutral I guess lol. But then at the Ernie Parker part it does go very face but towards the end felt like you backtracked into neutral town again.
I think, like you said, you're comfortable doing neutrals. I would say there wasn't any heelish content at all, and a little face. So he kind of comes across as a neutral taking a footstep across the border to faceopolis, lol. If that makes sense.
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Post by Jeremiah Greyson on Sept 5, 2016 2:10:48 GMT
I appreciate both of your comments very well and feel like you hit on exactly the same things I felt with him after my first rp was complete. That helps out a lot.
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Post by Trixie on Sept 5, 2016 2:19:20 GMT
I appreciate both of your comments very well and feel like you hit on exactly the same things I felt with him after my first rp was complete. That helps out a lot. Glad I could help out sweetie. Good luck in your next one. |
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Post by Ernie Parker on Sept 5, 2016 13:01:12 GMT
I can't give feedback on competitive pieces until after the show, but I've made some notes and you know - from Deathcore - that I'll give you some in-depth feedback upon request when the show is all said and done.
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